Wednesday, June 20, 2012
LovEmotion
I have been on quite the journey the past week of really trying to understand what it means to love. It has been one of the most spiritually frustrating, emotionally draining, and most humbling journey so far, and I am still on it. But it is oh so good, because I get to learn from the Master, whose name is Love.
Instead of writing a long blog about the journey, I decided to express my revelation through a poem. The poem type is called a Rondeau. I wrote the first stanza is from the viewpoint of Satan. The next stanza is from my viewpoint. Then the last stanza is from Jesus' point of view. Let me know what you think! Thanks.
LovEmotion
[Satan]
Come follow me, where you are king
Of everything you ever dreamed.
Love is submitted to your rule
Where all other thoughts come from fools
And from your lips, everyone sings.
Where all wisdom from you can ring;
Do not worry about one thing.
Everyone's hearts are your own tool.
Come follow me...
You do not have one single need.
Lost lovers and childrens hearts bleed.
But do not let them take your jewel.
There is no emotion to bring.
Come follow me.
[Me]
I don't understand how I lose
Everytime that I light the fuse
In my own heart and my own mind.
Love is patient and it is kind,
My thoughts of love I have abused.
My own perception gets confused
And He who is Love I accuse,
When really I have just been blind.
I don't understand...
When I overthink, I excuse
All of the truth that I should choose.
No longer will the enemy bind
Truth, because I realize it's fine
I don't understand.
[Jesus]
Come follow me, where I am king
Of everything you ever dreamed.
Love is submitted to my rule
Where I welcome all, even fools
To lift their voices and to sing.
Where all wisdom from me can ring;
Do not worry about a thing.
Use your burdens as your own stool.
Come follow me...
I care to every single need.
Lost lovers and childrens hearts bleed.
And yet, they are my very jewel.
Emotions of love are not cruel.
Come follow me.
The End.
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Incredible
ReplyDeleteThis is great, Daniel!
ReplyDeleteExcellent Daniel! Lots to always be learned through His Love.
ReplyDeleteDaniel, this is brilliant! Very well done
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